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   16 Sep 10, 06:03 PM Buyer

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- The lettering has a lot of white space between it. In typing the words out, the letters "P" and "e", and the letters "e" and "c" in the word "Perfect" have a lot of white space between them. I guess this is the natural spacing between letters when typing out the logo, but perhaps the spacing could be improved?

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   16 Sep 10, 06:00 PM Buyer

I have been looking at this with a friend, and would like to make some additional remarks. I think this is by far one of the best submissions. Working towards a perfect logo for us, could I make the following observations:
- The Arch itself lacks tension. It is equal in width the whole way, and it creates a staid and bland character. If it could be narrower at the top, it would create more tension, indicative of the conflict prevalent in architectural design.
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   16 Sep 10, 11:57 AM

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